Adam and the Fruit

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By SirDent

A creative look at the story of Adam and Eve.

I see Eve coming toward me and she is carrying something in her hand. I wonder what it is. As she approaches closer I notice that its a piece of fruit. I wait for her to come up to me. She says, "Take this fruit and eat it, It is fruit of the tree of knowledge of good and evil." I say to her, "No! God has told us not to eat this fruit or we will die." Eve then says. "I ate this fruit and I am still alive. Did God deceive us?" "No," I tell her, "God did not deceive us. God always speaks the truth. Who told you God deceives us?" Eve, now feeling frightened, says, "The serpent told me if I ate this fruit I will not surely die."

Sorrow fills my heart and my soul. I keep asking myself, "Why did she have to eat that fruit?" Fear grips me as I realize that Eve is now going to die. I will once again be all alone. God gave Eve to me to help me. She is my companion and my best friend. I feel tormented waiting for what is going to happen soon. How can I go on without the love of my life? I ponder in my heart what death is really like. I know that God created me to live forever. He gave me a body that is not made to taste death. Eve had this same body also but she gave up her eternal body for one that will feel the sting of death. What should I do? My love for her is so strong that I feel I cannot go on without her. When she dies I may as well be dead. There is none that can replace her in my life. I feel loneliness coming upon me already, and she is still with me. I must do something, but what can I do? I cannot give her life back to her. God is the only one that can give life.

My head hurts me oh so badly from trying to figure out what to do. The pain is unbearable. The ache in my heart is so strong that it piercer my soul. I must make up my mind now. I decided I also will eat this fruit. I know that death will come but I love her so much that I cannot go on without her. She was the most precious gift God could give me. I love her completely with all my heart and soul. I go to Eve and she hands me the fruit. I put it to my lips and I eat. My eyes open and now I can see that we are both naked. We can see our shame in what we had done.

Suddenly, I hear God coming through the garden this evening. I must run and hide from Him. If He finds out what we did he will be so angry that he will destroy both of us. I find some leaves and hide my nakedness. I hear God calling out to me, "Adam? Adam, where are you?" I hear this over and over until I cannot stand it anymore. I come out of my hiding place to face God. God ask me, "Why do you hide from me Adam?" I say to God, "Because I was naked I hid from you God. I am so ashamed of my nakedness and the nakedness of Eve." God asks me, "Who said that you were naked Adam?" I said, "The woman that you gave me to be my companion gave me fruit of the tree of knowledge of good and evil and I ate it. She gave it to me and I ate it because she ate it. My love for her goes so deep that if she was gone away my grief would be more that I could bear. I did not eat it just to defy you God. I ate it because of the love I have for her."

God kills two animals and makes coats for us so that our nakedness would be covered. He curses the serpent that deceived Eve in the garden of Eden. He tells me that I will eat only by the sweat of my face. I am now removed from the Garden of eden and cannot go back. God has put a flaming sword guarding the entrance into the garden. I must now live with the threat of death forever hanging over my head. But I see Eve and I thank God for her. She is still my soul-mate and always will be. Death will come no matter what. One thing I still know for sure. God loves me even though I did make a mistake. He will always love me, because He created me.

Comments

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In The Doghouse 4 years ago

Thank you for you thoughts on the fall. I love Father Adam and Mother Eve. I call it a "fall up" because of the fact that by their fall, we could all progress. From the very beginning they were taught of a Savior, as God instituted the "law of sacrifice", when he gave them the "coat of skins" from the offering, to be a constant reminder of the need they have of a Savior. Thank you for sharing your views.

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SirDent Hub Author 4 years ago

Thank you for the comment. When I wrote this I tried to give a little insight as to why Adam would eat the fruit when he knew it would bring him death. Satan didn't deceive Adam, he deceived Eve. Of course, what I wrote might not be true, but it does give an explanation that might be valid.

Sciantel 4 years ago

It's so funny but I never thought about it like that. Jesus did say that whoever puts father or mother wife brother or sister before Me is not worthy of Me. I love God more than any earthly anybodys and I live only for Him. He is my Husband. I have never married and will never marry. I married Christ 12 years ago. Paul even said it is best if we do not marry. It clouds our judgement and it sure did Adam. I'm so blessed He called me to be of His Bride to then do His ministry.

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RGraf 3 years ago

Very interesting way to look at this. I enjoyed it. Makes one think.

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SirDent Hub Author 3 years ago

Thanks for the read and comment Rgraf. This is just a different way of looking at why Adam ate the fruit knowing that it would cause his death.

adam hoffman 3 years ago

thanks this is a good depiction of the story from adam's perspective, which gives a clarification why Adam ate the fruit knowing it would make him sin. As soon as Adam and Eve sinned they were clothed By God's rightouesness through the animal skin(or lamb sking).

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SirDent Hub Author 3 years ago

Thanks you Adam for the comment. This is merely one way of looking at the reason he did what he did. It is not concrete by any chance.

issues veritas 3 years ago

So what happened to the snake?

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SirDent Hub Author 3 years ago

The anske is as God said it would be. He crawls around on his belly in the dust. Of course if you mean the serpent as in Satan, he is still around tempting mAN.

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daveearley 3 years ago

Good re-creation Sir Dent. God likely expelled Adam and Eve from the Garden because if they ate from the Tree of Life they would remain in their fallen state.

Of course the Garden was probably washed away by the flood, but is supposedly somewhere around Ethiopia. However, I wonder what the flaming sword was?

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SirDent Hub Author 3 years ago

Dave, this was written as an exercise in creative writing. Athough it could be correct in many ways it is not according to the Word of God.

Sciantel 3 years ago

That's nice what you wrote. I do not care for the too near nude pictures. I put God first in my life. He is my husband, and my best friend, not a mortal. I've never married and will never. I live only to serve Him so I guess I don't know how Adam felt to lose Eve. I only know I would not give up my eternity with God, just because my family or loved ones might to follow after their own desires.That is their life not mine. It's when we take our focus off God that we fall away in the first place. I know I have sinned and fell away from God because we all sin and fall short, but I received God back the moment I received Jesus Christ into my heart. I do know people can love one another above God, I just know I do not.

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Brenda Durham Level 5 Commenter 23 months ago

Good story Sir Dent. Could be a window into what Adam was thinking, yes.

jake 5 months ago

Hi, Many terms in Holy books has it's own inner meanings to retain it's Holiness. As far as what i have learned from spiritual leaders, is that the term "Fruit" doesn't mean the actual fruit. (evil force tempting them to do sexual intercourse). Having sexual intercourse is termed as the word "Fruit"....which turned out to be a sinn

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